Looking at all the positive and negative feedback comments, we now have a strong idea about what needs to be improved and what people really like. The strongest point in our work is the locations. We have used a variety of different and bright locations which people have really noticed and liked. They all agree the shots are good in terms of order, the fact that we have arranged them so they are not all at the start has given us good comments from many people.
Looking at the first draft and hearing from other people, the three main things we can improve on are:
1. Changing/re-filming/removing shots that have too dark lighting as it spoils the lighter and more detailed shots.
2. Improving the pace and movement in the video especially the chorus and the end instrumental part.
3. Using editing effects, improve the brightness and lighting on certain shots to make them vibrant and crisp so they all look as good as each other.