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Feedback so far

lucyharding98
Feedback so far
Now that we have finished our first draft, we have asked lots of people for their opinions on our video. We will consider everything they say in order to improve.
Feedback from Miss Brookes
" I love the amount of footage, there's lots to work with which allows to use really nice shots, especially exterior shots are really nice. Could change the first few shots so not as many graffiti wall images are used as a couple are seen one after the other. Could also use more movement as a lot of the shots are static and make the video less exciting"
Feedback from mr amato
"I think the exterior shots are great, the quality is a lot better and more crisp then the interior and I would consider removing certain interior shots as they do not look as good compared to these. More movement needs to be added by moving the camera faster and more zooms in and out of Soraya"
feedback from miss field 
" Soraya is an amazing performer which makes it look great. I would say that the only things to change would be certain shots are too dark which lighting can fix and maybe filters and effects."


"The locations are great and are all spread out. Another small thing, the time lapse looks a bit vauge as it is not clear that it is a time lapse as there is no clouds to show this, this could be re-filmed in the same location to improve this but the idea is nice as it fits the lyrics and is a different location/setting"
fEEDBACK FROM TARGET AUDIENCE
" I love the costume and makeup of Soraya. I love indie pop and this look really suits Soraya and her image. I love the song choice again which really suits Sorayas look and personality. The backgrounds in the video are great but I would change less shots of the graffiti wall and see more of her in Spain as they look really nice"
feedback from females in the class

Olivia - " I like how not all the locations are shown at the start, they are all introduced at different times and i love the locations and how Soraya performs. It would look good if the beach shots and sea are more vibrant so some editing effects could make this look even better."

 

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Frankie - " I love Soraya's performance it makes it look really professional, i would say that a couple of shots may need to be a little shorter as some are a bit longer. "


Will - " I think it looks really good like an actual music video, the locations are great, especially the ones in Spain. I would say that the paint shot in the last chorus needs to change as it is not as good looking at the shots before and after it as it is not as upbeat which makes the movement look less effective to the songs pace."

Feedback from males in the class
improvements from this feedback 
Looking at all the positive and negative feedback comments, we now have a strong idea about what needs to be improved and what people really like. The strongest point in our work is the locations. We have used a variety of different and bright locations which people have really noticed and liked. They all agree the shots are good in terms of order, the fact that we have arranged them so they are not all at the start has given us good comments from many people. 

Looking at the first draft and hearing from other people, the three main things we can improve on are: 
1. Changing/re-filming/removing shots that have too dark lighting as it spoils the lighter and more detailed shots. 

2. Improving the pace and movement in the video especially the chorus and the end instrumental part.

3. Using editing effects, improve the brightness and lighting on certain shots to make them vibrant and crisp so they all look as good as each other. 

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